Score: 10

"I've kept this with me..."

submission: Till death do us part

date: May 18, 2009

I remember I saw this when you first made it, and 6 years on I still remember it.
I think about it every now and then. And now that I have a child, it hits harder.

This is a fantastic piece of storytelling, with an appropriate and emotive soundtrack.

Thank you for this.

Score: 8

"This is ridiculous!"

submission: Duck.fla Spin

date: May 22, 2007

Technically, this is a pile of crap and should receive no merits whatsoever, but I can't quite put my finger on why it's so funny but it's great! Haha

Score: 7

"Work on your recitation..."

submission: The Raven

date: September 21, 2006

I liked the style, a Tim Burton style goes very well with this Poem (Which, is an awesome poem that I've always loved). But there are one or two things I had trouble with.

This bears a strong resemblance to the interpretation done in the Simpsons in one of the Hallowe'en episodes, which is good and bad. But yeah, first thing that struck me was the resemblance.

Also, this is neither a praise or a criticism, but Lenore looks very much like Sally in Nightmare Before Christmas. I wasn't surprised, as you'd said about the Burton influence... But it did make me laugh.

I liked most of it, but the one thing I had a specific problem with was your narration. Sometimes it was too fast, sometimes it was kind of emotionless, sometimes it was just right, sometimes it was almost exactly like the Simpsons version.

But yeah, overall it was really good. Good choice of music, good choice of style, I was on the most part impressed. Well done, needs some work though...